Do you like or dislike my writing? I have never written something like this before and I don't know?

I felt a sleep and bashed my head in requiring five stitches! Why? Because this sounds boring. When writing fiction or non-fiction always open with a strong hook (as I did with this) you have to grab the attention of the reader right away. Also don’t try to impress the reader with big words when smaller words will work. Break up your sentences into smaller paragraphs. Long sections of words will cause the reader to loose interest. But don’t loose heart if you love to write keep it up and do what every writer does rewrite and rewrite. Good luck.